by Kips2.0 Sep 12, 2011
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
We've come from different places, |
by Yrem Crish
In my first impression I feel that this piece is annoying because of the repetitions of the first words but as I reading your poem the vividness draw me to continually read your whole poem. It's really great. Good job! |
by Kips2.0
Thanks |
I love this, it has os much meaning, and many can relate to it, I don't see anything wrong with it, I love it, great job, 100/100 |
by Kips2.0
Thanks for the reviews |
by Xanthe
I like the repetition here. Kinda fits for my tastes. The message as well is clear. Great job :) |