by Liliana
I like the repetition of We, good job |
by aanika R I P
Beautiful it is :) |
by Kips2.0
God is good in all He does. |
by Xanthe
I like the repetition here. Kinda fits for my tastes. The message as well is clear. Great job :) |
by Kips2.0
Thanks for the reviews |
I love this, it has os much meaning, and many can relate to it, I don't see anything wrong with it, I love it, great job, 100/100 |
by Kips2.0
Thanks |
by Yrem Crish
In my first impression I feel that this piece is annoying because of the repetitions of the first words but as I reading your poem the vividness draw me to continually read your whole poem. It's really great. Good job! |