Overlooked

by Melissa   Sep 12, 2011


This tiny line holds all the grand things we'll never have,
but you're too lustful
to notice my poems subtleties

How fitting.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Britt

    Only you could write four lines with seemingly no structure, and say a hundred things. 22 words and you've made more of an impact than a lot of poetry does. Talk about simplicity at it's best ;) I love it!