Comments : Set me free

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I'm light as a feather
    awaiting to be whisked away
    by the wind that comes
    from far away.

    I could see this happening.
    You feel the pain you feel & how so badly you just wanna forget it!
    I loved this poem girl <3
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Hey there! :)

    I liked your write since the title was really simple-yet-catchy. I needed to say this phrase many times before...set me free. Yes, I could grasp all the sadness you were trying to show, the poetic expressions you used were beyond description, seriously. I agree with Holly that I could imagine everything especially that part, it was so real and so sad.

    Good write.