Comments : A Glimpse Of Our Future (collab)

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I love this guys :)
    You can't tell who wrote what, but its a very good poem.

    I hope
    this friendship will last
    a glimpse of our future
    built in the past

    This is my favorite stanza :)
    Loved it.
    Emotion poured through & it flowed so well :).
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Wow,,its one of my favorite poem ..i cant stop myslf to vote for it..5 from me too

  • 13 years ago

    by Liliana

    Beauty in the eyes of you
    make me believe
    I am no more persecuted
    nor deceived

    my favorite, you guys did a good job :)

  • 13 years ago

    by DirtRoadGirl

    I loved this. Reminds me of myseld and my best friend <3 :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni

    I like the flow of this poem and the rhymes, though I'm usually not that much into it. I think that the emotions are really powerful and I wasn't able to tell who wrote what part. Well done.

  • 13 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    A powerful, glowing, humble, lovely and touching treatise to friendship..... a wonderful collaboration! Congratulations. Nominated.

  • 13 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Very nice tribute to a very nice person, well-done, Fairy, I like your images and your wording. Keep writing.

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Friendships that strong should be applauded. A great job , work of pure appreciation

  • 13 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww really nice poem! Great collaboration :)
    I enjoyed it and liked reading about this new friendship that is blossoming. Well done to both of you!

  • 13 years ago

    by Half Husband Half father

    Happines drunk my glower my favourite lyn 5/5 :-)

  • 13 years ago

    by Captain Lonesome

    You work well with her, It is a very Good Poem!! :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Spencer Johnson

    You painted a picture in my head through writing. defenantly 5/5 . great write, and keep up the good work:D

  • 13 years ago

    by Nomad Being

    A beautiful depict, I must say !!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Nomad Being

    A beautiful depict, I must say !!!