Comments : Spider and the Fly

  • 13 years ago

    by Matthew Schut

    I just happened to be the dumb fly that flew,
    into something so silky and secure.
    With the belief that I could be something too,
    filled with joyous giggling and squirming fun.

    I love this stanza!! It really made me think about being "trapped" in a relationship and how the web looks so secure and beautiful, only to be killed slowly!!

    NICE work!! I LOVE IT!!! :)

    Keep up the good work, SMILE! :)