Comments : Hollywood's Lights

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    The city lights intoxicates me,
    with uncertain qualities,
    being a star was never my dream,
    feeling so wanted yet so alone at the same time.

    -love this part, so true :).

    This is exactly what hollywood does to you. Poem flowed so perfectly and you could visualize it happening :)
    Great Job
    5/5