"Day by day,
she tries to find life's treasures,
searching for the beauty,
finding only handfuls of blood,
broken hearts scattered across the fields,
nothing but pain & death."

I love this stanza; I remember feeling this way once before because I couldn't find life's treasures for so long until I found a way to save myself.

Great work; amazing poem.
5/5

Wow this just... wow.
amazing !! so sad, really painful to read x
great job 5/5

Wow this just... wow.
amazing !! so sad, really painful to read x
great job 5/5

WOW!!!!! this hit my heart very strong and the emotions is overflowing and overwhelming...great poem it was sooooo vivid
My fav parts:
she plunges it into her brittle chest.

shes nothing but a constant reminder of broken loves pain,

Enough tears to fill up the oceans,
heart colder then the north pole,
crack, crack, crack,
it starts to shatter,
already black soul is vanishing,
her life is withering away.

just another empty soul roaming the streets,
10 stars girl