I would seriously love to know what exactly inspired you to write such a piece, this was powerful, very powerful.

I especially admired the 1st santaza, it was very descriptive , and so was the rest of the poem,

it's easy to say that a poem with this level of skill requires a ton of expertise, you've done a beautiful job Amanda,
God bless

I like your choise of words throughout the poem, very descriptive!!
And the way you ended each stanza with a one word line was a nice touch, unsure, alone, lost, it kinda sums it all up, great write, though i hope these feelings are soon escaped!! and thank you for welcoming me to the club.
Good Luck and God Bless!!

I see you have a down/voting fairy in your life. Absolute childish. Excellent poem and jealousy rears it's ugly head. Be proud of the low votes ,,envy ..what a strange word :-)

How can this just be ok it was an amazing write deep and meanful flawless piece :S poeple do confuse me .. anyway well written poem 5/5 deffo no matter what it says

Flawless and meaning full u deserve a better rating

This poem is strong and really struck a chord with me. I felt the emotion behind each stanza and was deeply moved by your words. Short yet well said and heartfelt. A very interesting piece as I found myself not only relating to the poem as I could make it fit around a situation I have found myself but the poem also made me curious as to what led you to write something so powerful. A gripping piece.

5/5