Aww... this poem is such a feel-good poem! I loved it... I love how it starts out sad but ends up happy, and showing true growth and motivation... That really is inspiring! I also must say I loved the structure you used, and how you would choose one word as the last line in some of the stanzas. It made the poem more interesting and captivating. Great job! 5/5

Incredible poem, wording was so different , it flowed and breathed a life of it's own. Excellent piece

Connie

This poem made me go aww.

"If I could choose one word, and one word only
to describe how I feel when I'm with you-
Fortunate"

^ This was my favorite part

5/5