I love this !

I have to admit, that even though this might be filled with cliche expression you made this really original in your own kind of way. I do not think that this belongs into the Fun & Humor section because it still seems like a love poem to me after all.

I thought that the title is really eye-catching, that's what actually brought me here and I think it fits to the poem. I like your choice of words and how you worded this poem. It almost flows compltely smoothly. The message is definitely strong and I think you did a good job writing this.

You brought a big smile with your cliche's and who said they can't work . lOL Amazing and original very witty Loved it

Connie

Very clever and a write worth reading. I really get tired of critics saying something is cliche. I mean we can go to the extreme but a line in a poem is no biggie.
I applaud you in this write Great job

The scorn of a thousand dead roses
I heap thee about! I feel like I don't
care about you anymore. You are a pitiful
bug. But I love you more deeply than ever!
~ this is my most favorite part but great poem I looovveed it :) :) I love the wording with the rose
U worded ur poem very well and it flowed fantastically :) 10 stars 5/5

This is so nice:) its shows ur smartness:) a 5 from me

Omg, this was so funny, Zach:)

Somehow it makes life lighter, when you are able to laugh about the pain.

"Or anything with a rose petal" ha ha ha ha! Oh, I love this poem!

A very well done from me,

5/5 Ingrid

"Or anything with a rose petal" hehe, I have to agree with all that is said above. :)
Well written!
5/5

"Words
cannot explain my sadness, except
what I write in this poem."

I enjoyed this line :)

Wonderful write! 5/5

mandy

The scorn of a thousand dead roses

one of the most touching lines I've read its raveled in deep meaning but still explains the feeling.