Times Confusion

This is really a good poem... covered with all emotions and feelings... epress everything you are feeling... but i think you should have made it little bit more questionable... kinda like asking question to uself and trying to find the answers with urself...that would have made this poem a perfect peiece..it's good right now but it would had got even better..

I'm scared,
why?
and of what?

In this 1st stanza you are asking question with urself.. and that is a great start..

I'm scared to love
I'm scared to care
but I feel
I'm scared to be alone forever
I'm scared to lose myself
I'm scared to fall
I'm scared of getting hurt
What is it that scares me
because I can't figure it out.

check out in the 2nd stanza... instead of using I'm if you had asked question by using why i'm it would have been better like

Why I'm scared to love
Why I'm scared to care
but I feel
Why I'm scared to be alone forever
Why I'm scared to lose myself
Why I'm scared to fall
Why I'm scared of getting hurt
What is it that scares me
because I can't figure it out.

In this moment right now
I feel lost
I don't know what I want.
I feel alone
I feel numb.
but I'm not.

Time
seems to have stopped
I'm frozen
Why can't i move forward
but then again
time moves so fast
Why can't i keep up.

I wonder what my purpose in life is?
but I don't want to dwell
because it's a waste of my time.
So I'll move on
because life is short
so I shouldn't worry
I should be happy
so I should live
because death can come at anytime.

I'm a little confused
but I'll be fine
it's just a matter of time.

It's just my suggestion..:) overall ur poem is great..:) i loved ur way ..:) 5/5

I love this girl.

I'm scared to love
I'm scared to care
but I feel
I'm scared to be alone forever
I'm scared to lose myself
I'm scared to fall
I'm scared of getting hurt
What is it that scares me
because I can't figure it out.

-Favorite(: Everybody can relate to this poem so well. It flowed perfectly and you could feel what you felt
<3
5/5

I think this is one of your most open/deepest poem. way to put it out there!