by yogi73
I think this is one of your most open/deepest poem. way to put it out there! |
I love this girl. |
by lOsT sOuL
This is really a good poem... covered with all emotions and feelings... epress everything you are feeling... but i think you should have made it little bit more questionable... kinda like asking question to uself and trying to find the answers with urself...that would have made this poem a perfect peiece..it's good right now but it would had got even better.. |