Comments : No longer a secret...

  • 13 years ago

    by Georgia

    I love how you have written this !!
    also i love the emotions in it.
    5/5 amazing work !!

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Wow, this is beautiful.
    tears filled my eyes as i read this.
    I can relate to most parts of it
    it flowed beautifully, emotion was raw & pure. the hurt she caused you flows out.

    I always looked past the hurt you caused
    I always told you that we could fix it
    I always held back the tears in my eyes
    And said I would never quit
    - I can relate to this 100%. Always giving the one you loves chances & looking past everything bcuz they mean so much to you.

    It felt like you read my mind with most of this
    Your best yet<3
    10/10:)

  • 13 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    Your poems really tear at the heart. A good poet makes the reader feel, think and cry. You accomplished all of those in a perfect pen.

    Connie Keep writing and making me cry :-)