Jenni,
I loved the originality of this, the simplicity of the words and the vivid imagery created, this was so well written I don't know what to say.
LOL
Love
Tara

Your talents soar with the eagles my friend. Each word each line better then the one before. I am so happy to know you and learn from your ability to write with beauty

Connie

"The freedom will purify
my hurt, exchange it
with honesty and fill me
with faith. That part
reflects our secure
friendship."

Jenni- this had to be the most sincere poem I've ever read about this friendship you have with him, this intense love that has so much faith. reading your words gave me hope, knowing that love can free the heart and yourself from doubt......The flow here was incredible and what kind of struck me the most was that you didn't need all those adjectives or big words- you used something simple to get that depth across.

Beautiful title and flow of so many ideas that are so beautiful.
A winner in my mind!
Take care :)
MaryAnne

The title draws people in. ... this was ab outstanding write i thought it was sooo powerful n very unique. .. flawless x

Jenni! I really love this. The ending was epic.

And the way you wrote this.. is awesome!! XD

Aww this is such a sweet love poem... I loved the beginning, it was just so sweet >>

I breathe in the aroma
and take a sip of the
coffee cup that you made me;
it befuddles me in a way
only your scent can do.

Loved it... I also loved this stanza:

I step towards the window
and my eyes wander across
the stout perspective as a
purple Orchid catches my
attention. It sways with ease
as I drown in my memories.

I love orchids.. I actually have a poem called White Orchid. I think the purple orchid added to your poem in a lovely way. Great job hon!!

I've used my votes for the week but Please remind me to nominate it come Monday. This poem is enjoyable from beginning to end. Your wording if superb I'm adding you to my favorites for I can see what great talent you have. Happy writing

I step towards the window
and my eyes wander across
the stout perspective as a
purple Orchid catches my
attention. It sways with ease
as I drown in my memories.

I love the imagery of this sentence and overall you penned a really great poem as usual 5/5 :)

I don't think that i have anything left to comment in this great piece of work... I love the follow of your poem... words are so strong in it.. it just goes on and on..:):) this is just awsome..:):) 5/5

I tink ur writing is now at its peak.

This was a lovely poem to read. I really enjoyed it. The wording was great. I saw nothing wrong with it.

gave it a 5/5

This is amazing:) I donno y I didnt read this before:) 5/5

Jenni: Certainly a deserving win. These stanza's were particularly eye catching:

"I step towards the window
and my eyes wander across
the stout perspective as a
purple Orchid catches my
attention. It sways with ease
as I drown in my memories."

"The freedom will purify
my hurt, exchange it
with honesty and fill me
with faith. That part
reflects our secure
friendship."

And the best 3 lines of the poem:

"Your tender hug brings
me back to reality, though
I'll never leave loves clouds,"

A poem tender, filled with hope, friendship and love, and of course ...stay in the clouds....!

Congratssssssssssssssssssssssss
:DDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Congratulations- what a precious jewel from the heart...it will be remembered on here.

Very proud of you :)
keep it up!

MaryAnne

I go away for a few weeks and you are bow a full vlown poetess lol. ... Jenni this was outstanding the image you set

a worth wnner

Tony
xxxxx

Jenni I have fallen in love with this poem it really gets at me and I am not sure why.

Excellent

5/5

So softly written though each word abrasing ma heart. . cn any1 b dis much talentd. hates off ma frnd.:-)

Love, as usual awesome job! :)

Ur poems ar too sweet.