This poem is so true.
I've felt this way before.
you could see what you were writing & it flowed so well.
good job
5/5

The title is so alluring I had to comment. A beautiful piece inscribing the enigma of being submerged In love.

Very good, short but very deep

I adore this! I like the darkness of love that you describe. It's not all roses and laughter!
The 2nd stanza really stood out to me.
Great job!