Amazing (:.
You tell them how you feel, everybody doubted in you, but you proved them all wrong.

you're part of my past, but you are not my future.
-i love this part :). This is a very deep powerful line. saying you're not longer part of my future. you put ur foot down & said what u had to say.

Nothing i would change.
Perfect(:
You deserve more then a 5
so
100/100 :)
Love you girl

Awesome job. It shows just how strong you really are. Maybe they don't see it for a number of reasons, but you see it and thats all that matters. This piece is pure emotion, there is thought still but even that holds more emotion then other words could. You have an excellent description here. The flow of it all is awesome. Your choice of words was immaculate. Fantastic piece, I gave it a 5/5