Dream girl...

by Matthew Schut   Sep 15, 2011


I sit and write this tonight
My love for you grows stronger
I miss you so much right now
I don't think I can take it any longer

Please just come home to me
Repair my broken heart
Mesh my hand with yours
And never be apart

As I think about my dream girl
The one that I have forever missed
Although I haven't found her yet
It's because... she doesn't exist

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  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow, this is an awesome poem. Good job. It is simple and short and cool. The emotion is perfect, the flow is nice and the word choice is nice for the piece.

  • 13 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    Your poem makes me reflect on dreams of that someone, do they really exist or do we just dream ,Again excellent
    \
    Connie

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    As I think about my dream girl
    The one that I have forever missed
    Although I haven't found her yet
    It's because... she doesn't exist

    -this is a deep stanza. but its beautiful. You know what you want and you think shes doesn't exist...
    when like you've told me they do & you'll find yours someday bcuz ur an amazing person :)
    Loved the poem
    5/5