As I think about my dream girl
The one that I have forever missed
Although I haven't found her yet
It's because... she doesn't exist

-this is a deep stanza. but its beautiful. You know what you want and you think shes doesn't exist...
when like you've told me they do & you'll find yours someday bcuz ur an amazing person :)
Loved the poem
5/5

Your poem makes me reflect on dreams of that someone, do they really exist or do we just dream ,Again excellent
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Connie

Wow, this is an awesome poem. Good job. It is simple and short and cool. The emotion is perfect, the flow is nice and the word choice is nice for the piece.