You are amazing..
why?

because your poetry is amazing
your soul is amazing
and your words always make me feel inspired...

I liked this write by you, sweets...I truly liked it though it is simple and perhaps...'plain' but I LOVED the emotions, and the confusions between the stanzas...you began it with sadness and ended it with confidence it just made me feel moved. :)

anyways, the last line wasn't that poetic....I'd suggest that you might change it into something more poetical or...I don't know it's just not poetic this way.

the title however fits the content of the poem. I love this song by christina and you made it even better in my eyes by writing such a piece.

Very well-written.

Your talents are showing in this piece lol Loved it can't think of a thing that I would change Excellent

Connie

My favorite thing about this poem was the little one-word segways you used. I also liked the erratic nature of it, it encapsulates how you feel and eliminates the need for a picture in the sense that it's an emotional journey that people can relate to.