Comments : Deer in the Headlights

  • 13 years ago

    by Captain Lonesome

    Very good poem
    my favorite stanza is
    Preparing to be frozen
    Beauty etched in ice
    To never touch this love again
    Virtue turned to vice
    it say a great deal about the feelings most of the poem, kinda like the deapth of the mood all wrapped into one, i guess
    and the last couple of lines do a great job of turning it all around from the hardness we become back into the vulnerability we face as humans who feel! excelent job!