Knowing

by Innocent Fairy   Sep 15, 2011


Do you know me?
Do i know me?
I'm scared for you to know me,
i hide from everyone
and i think too much.

I'm scared for everyone to know me
it's how i get hurt
but it's better than being alone.
I don't care
i search for people,
people only i can trust.
Right now i have one
and that's my best friend.

I am only half shown to others
which are some of my friends.
I have more faith,
hope,
courage,
and happiness in hand,
way more than yesterday.

Someday my desires will be complete
and what i need
will already be with me.
Though right now
my body is in a battle,
i feel a little...
under the weather you may say
but all else is fine.

After bathing in the light
I know who i am,
A rose
basking in the sunset,
colors so fine
gleaming with a shine.
Sunlight
and moonlight
completing my Divine beauty,
I am now able to fly.

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  • 13 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    "A rose
    basking in the sunset,
    colors so fine
    gleaming with a shine.
    Sunlight
    and moonlight"

    The chosen words here are so nicely set in this interesting poem, they seem to be out of a love poem or a nature poem adding an exquisite quality to the verses. I am always surprised how well some poets use certain words.

    A little variation in use is presented here :

    A rose
    basking in the sunset,
    colors so dazzling
    radiant
    in the sunlight and
    luminous
    in the moonlight

  • 13 years ago

    by lOsT sOuL

    Wow... now you are making me speechless... your poems are sparkling in my eyes..:) it's just awsome....:) if you will change some of the words in it .. it will be beyond limitation in poetry....:)
    ^^
    Do i know me?
    Do you know me?
    I'm scared for you to know me,
    i am hiding from everyone
    and i think too much.

    In this stanza if you start with a question to urself .. that would been awsome.. and little bit change in I am hiding instead ot I hide....
    ^^
    I'm scared for everyone to know me
    it's how i get hurt
    but it's better than being alone.
    I don't care
    i search for people,
    people only i can trust.
    Right now i have one
    and that's my best friend.

    this stanza is perfect but a slight change in here "i am looking for someone whom i can trust... "

    That's it ..:) everything is perfect ..:) it's a strong and great poem..:):) 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by average thoughts

    I loved this one..5 frm me..dear..