Amazing.
Tears filled my eyes as i read it.
Pain poured through, also how strong the love is does too.

"You know I love you with all my heart"
He whispers with tears in his eyes
"But I don't think I will ever be ready"
Her heart shattered as she cries
-I love this, you can actually picture her starting to cry.

Amazing poem.
I think we should do a heartbreak depressed collab :)
5/5

I don't think I've read a more powerful and intense poem. This was filled with a gambit of emotion and pain. Well penned, awesome flow. Excellent

Connie