This will be for sure nominated the next week. Amreen, you haven't been in our club but for few days, yet, you amazed us all. Though you were late to do that contest but you were the winner! I loved your piece so much. :)

I loved it.

Five

It isn't really a poem. Try changing the format. The wording was ok.

gave it a 4/5

This just seemed like a list of facts..maybe use some more colorful words and Rework the format?

Namaste!
App kaise hain? ( that's pretty much all I know, lol)

This piece is informative. It gives the reader a preview of what India is about by explaining the meaning of the colors and parts of Its flag.

I have to agree, It doesn't look like a poem but more like an article. In either case, Its good.

This is certainly not a poem it is more like an advertisment for a holiday brouchure with a factual writing on a country called India. how anyone could consider this a winning poem is beyond my comprehension.

I loved the simplicity of the poem. This poem reveals how proud and thus faithful you are to your country. You know since my childhood until now I also loved India and this guided me to dig for the the indian history and culture either through reading or watching movies. i remember an old one having the name "Disco Dancer" and another new 'Bollywood vs hollywood' having the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UwqVCJFBdBY
Untill now I feel enjoyed when somebody reminds me for any Indian topic and now you did that favor for me. Thank you for sharing this poem about the Indian glory.