Beneath frozen land
vitality and hope concentrate,
melting the ice in order that
spirited plants may arise
this is my favorite of all, and I really got captivaded by the title, you penned a really great poem :)

WoooW:) I really love this poem:)

Bad weeds grow tall
but have confidence
in these buds,
they will blossom
and reveal your dreams.

This is my fav stanza:) keep the perfect work:) hahaha:)

Jenni, always you write such magnificent poems, but this one is even more amazing then most. You have imagery, description, emotion, and a purpose all at once. Your choice of words was really nice, and I think that only improved the piece. Your flow is well written. You start off barely saying a thing and then you slowly say what needed to be said. Your title was amazing. Great job.

I loved the ending!! Full of hope.
A really good piece here, some awesome imagery, with good flow and simple words with meaning

lovely Jen
love
Tara
x

This was such a breathtaking piece, it was so easy to love and enchant because of the example your words gave me- the hope, how we don't have to hide beneath our souls and that cold weather that can take us under. Original and unique, you say so much that has this incredible purpose- relating winter to our souls, flowing into one grand last thought. That we are capable of overcoming winter and letting serenity warm us.

Beautifully written Jenni!
Take care XD

I love this part the most:

Sacrifice your credulity,
draw hope from this melody
and know that you overcome
souls winter.

Sacrificing credulity is often necessary, because many people tend to lose hope fairly quickly. Lovely and witty piece. 5/5

Diction perfectly penned.ideas well expressed,imagery totally captivating nd flows uninterruptedly.gud piece

I tried but couldn't pick a favorite stanza. Absolute brilliancy.

This poem is Amazing.... i had never thought that i would ever get a chance to read poem like this... it's great.. words full of hope and courage... :):) i loved it .every single words touches my heart... it flows so silently...and smoothly...

Whenever a heart
bursts asunder
a noxious drop falls
and unseals our
souls winter.

Now snow conceals
the dull medley of
feelings and damps
the sounds so that
serenity may comfort us.

Beneath frozen land
vitality and hope concentrate,
melting the ice in order that
spirited plants may arise.

Bad weeds grow tall,
but have confidence
in these buds,
they will blossom
and reveal your dreams.

Sacrifice your credulity,
draw hope from this melody
and know that you overcome
souls winter.

It's has so much power.. which shows a light of hope ... no matter what happen, no matter what you are going through... there is still hope of everything getting better.... :):) i loved it ..:):) it's going in my favorite..:):) 5/5

I won't drag on this comment so I will just add "nominated" Best poem of the day

Ah Jenni you did it again Nominated :-)

A beautifully worded play of words concealed in wintry emotions. Each stanza is unique and touching. Certainly, deserving of a nomination.

Jenni! I was looking for this!! :p

Of course it's awesome, my opinion !!!

Very lovely piece, i like how you captured its essence.

I liked it. You got your point across. The wording was good and it was a good length.

gave it a 5/5

I saw this piece earned nominations but I have something to point, and I hope you won't mind me posting this.

A souls winter by Jenni

^ A soul's winter/Souls Winter

and unseals our
souls winter.

^souls' winter.

credulity,
^ I love this word though, totally fits with the theme of this piece.

I loved the clarity in this piece, from the line formation and its vocab. Keep it up!

There was something musical about this. It felt like I was reading lyrics. I found this poem to be different yet likeable.

5/5

This is a breathtaking poem, I dont know how you mannage to captivating me jsut by reading a few words. Thats the affect of poetry, and you have a great grasp on this. You have talent in general, and you portrayed your talent through this poem.
Great Work.
5/5

Amazingly penned with beautiful imagery fitting the poem.

5/5

-Heather