Comments : Sayonara

  • 13 years ago

    by Boy

    This is a very good poem.. this poem is full of emotions and full of sorrows. it shows the reader the loss for someone special in their lives.

    words belonging are so good. i like the chain of words also. i did not see the rhyming scheme in this poem because i think this is full of emotions and no need for rhyme it.. good work....

  • 13 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Though der r gud byes again n again.... though i sumtymz hate or do not lyk gudbyes... nyway dey r awl a part of lyf...

    new leaves replace old ones, same new lyf comes 2 replace old, same wid relationships.. may b d ppl we met along our walk of lyf awl dese years... in d end only memories remain...

    n a question widin wen we remember dose memoriews... we question ourselves... wats d person doin, wers d person, hows d person, does d person remember me n ..... d gudbye..... Sayonara...

    Luvly creative, meaningful poem tru 2 lyf gal...

    keep it up,... so nyc of u 2 post a luvly poem as such... keep it up....

  • 13 years ago

    by average thoughts

    I jus lv sch poems..which tels a lot wid its simplicity..and its always pleasure to read smthing as beautiful as dis frm a brilliant mind..5 ,5 and lovely 5..keep on writing simple..simplicity is alluring..