by Sylvia Sep 17, 2011
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Quietly spoken with a smile, |
Fervid, fierce, flaming and full of fondness to a fawn. Five/Five. |
by Exostosis
I will have to agree with everyone, it is a very sweet piece. It is rather hard to stay within the bounds of a structure and still leave readers wanting more. The flow is fluid and carries the notion flawlessly. |
by Meena Krish
I like this form and moreover liked what you have written. Its so sweet yet passionate! Loved the read :) |
by yogi73
Can I get a cigarette? :) very good |
You still got it Sylvia, a beautiful poem, wording and flow were perfection. The tenderness breathtaking. |