Your rhyme and flow was smooth. Wording was straight forward and clear. Very good poem indeed

You are amazing,Yaki, you are completely amazing............I always write a poem after reading one of yours...
this work was...beyond my words or descriptions..I want to say something but words fail me, seriously...there are some images and similes that..just wowed me.

so I wont bother repeating myself,ever again,just know that you are amazingg...endlesssly.

Love you