I really like the images you portray with your words because they're really strong and vivid. I think that this poem flows well and I like how the context developes from one stanza to another. I'm not really into dark poetry, but I actually enjoyed this pleasant read.

Glad to see you writing again. -Nik

:-) you gave me chills with this poem. Excellent flow and a extremely intriguing write. I enjoyed this very much. I know of someone that loves dark poetry I'm going to have him read this. I know he will love it as I do

Connie

This poem has a sense of power, and a good amount of imagery. Great job! :)

It seems we have a down voting fairy running around all over the place lately lol..
You have to be the master of dark poems. I think I've said it before , your vocabulary is impeccable. This had intensity , it was dynamic in content..Excellent

This poem is written really well, so well infact it paints pictures in the readers head. I don't normally enjoy a lot of dark poetry but this was one of the exceptions

5/5