Family picture [senryu ]

by Boy   Sep 18, 2011


Early days photo
My lovely family is
Unforgettable

A senryu is a three line Japanese poem . It is UNrhymed and the subject is based human nature etc.

line 1 > 5 syllables
line 2 > 7 syllables
line 3 > 5 syllables

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  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Nice poem and very meaningful...direct to the point. I like the way you connects it in every line. Good job:)

  • 13 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Good use of irony: the photo is 'unforgetable'

  • 13 years ago

    by nouriguess

    OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

  • 13 years ago

    by Meme

    This is really great. Short and to the point.

  • 13 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    This is cuuuuutttttteeee:)