Comments : Tell Me Goodbye.......

  • 13 years ago

    by lovrgirl96

    Wow... That Is truly amazing. I understand where your coming from here. Really good job :)

  • 13 years ago

    by L

    I want to cry. A friend of mine once asked me : why do good people always have to go? and as i was reading this that question stroke my thoughts.
    Very good poem.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni

    This is such a heartbreaking poem. It's quite long, but that didn't bother me at all because I was captivated from beginning to end. The fact that this poem flows so smoothly made reading it even more enjoyable. You definately penned a touching poem here.

  • 13 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    I am really touched by this poem:) its great I love it:) ofc Im giving u a 5/5:)

  • 13 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    I wouldnt change a thing!

    heartbreaking and very emotional
    the flow was awesome

    defo 5/5

  • JEET you made me cry...i had to take a moment step away from my computer and lay on my bed for a while...im just im i have no words to say.

  • 13 years ago

    by laura

    Rly good

  • 13 years ago

    by Zara Baines

    Really enjoyed this

    I know how you were
    And how you were so shy
    But I wish you told me one thing
    I wish you would have said goodbye

  • 13 years ago

    by LOvEiSNotFoREvER

    That day when angels came down
    Was a sad day of grief
    When I first found out
    I stood in disbelief

    i loved this stanza.
    but overall everything was perfect
    i loved the emotions it reflected
    sad but amazing.
    1000/1000 :)

  • 13 years ago

    by BleedinEyes

    This is really a great piece of work.. i love each and every words of your poem.. i can't even explain that how much i loved it.. great work .. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Blackstar

    Really amazing again. Brought tears into my eyes while reading.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Wow... for how long this poem was, it managed a nice flow that rolled off the tongue beautifully to the very end.

    Superbly written.

    5/5

    -Heather