I think this is really flowing.

I like this style, simple yet so enticing to read.

'cuter' should be 'cutter', I think.

I enjoyed it !:)

The poem flowed nicely, deep and emotional meaning penned in this write. The theme took my breath as sadness took over
well done

Connie

^^I agree with my little sweet Connie, that the flow was nice and that's what I loved about the poem the most. :)

Your sad poems always leave an impression on me. Britt...good write! ;)

You're words, though simple, were powerful. As a past cutter, I know the feeling and could relate. Memories flooded back for me, but I have the love the poem was searching for. :D

I think the flow was very good and the placement of the pauses aided in the reading.

You are very talented. Keep up the good work. 5

I have to agree with the comments above. I think this poem flows really well and the emotions are strong. Though this poem was filled with sadness I really enjoyed reading it.

This was more imaginative than the other poem of yours that I read. I appreciate and respect your ability to create very short lines and stanzas but still get your point across. Personally though I prefer a little longer and descriptive poems, which I also think you have the potential and ability to create. I haven't read much of your poetry but if there's a wordier one that you have, let me know, I'd love to see it. I'm also too lazy to look for it myself, sorry :P