Love it

Hello, I just joined the site this morning, I read your poem it all seemed to flow along until I got to the line
bad boys good girls,
wanna have fun
with each one ?
I'm not sure if your working in a certain type of format but my suggestion for the line with each one would be to maybe change it to
with everyone
or with each and everyone
like this

bad boys good girls,
wanna have fun
with each and everyone.
that would flow smoother and make more sense, hope my suggestion dosen't offend you.

ty for sharing your work with me your poet friend SpoiledWrott10 =)