by nouriguess
You are right.....that was awesome..... |
by Tara Kay
Yes! I commented on this on Connie's, and I'll say the same, it is amazing, the flow and rhyming is perfect and the words just jump right out at me. |
I want to thank you for doing this awesome poem with me. You're the sweetest friend a girl could have and I enjoyed writing this with you. |
You two made an original poem of nature, blended with love. An eloquent poem, sensual, and delicate in emotions. Well done guys |
Hey guys: |
by Decayed
WOW! You both are awesome. Some chemistry, I can see.. Harmony, Melody, and each stanza flowed in sync with the other. |
by L
Pretty good! |
by Exostosis
A collaboration of two poets. A collaboration of two minds, to distill such an exception of vivid and creative composition which unifies elegance and tranquility. Nice job |
by Dreamofolwin
Heey.... What a stunning collab! Just took my breath away :)) I loved it .. Its just so beautifully written and an Excellent job. |
by mossgirl19
I felt it... |
by Meena Krish
This poem has such a delicate touch of love to it..so fragile yet so beautiful. Loved the flow and the meaning in this..good job :) |
Such beautful features, it reminded me of my favorite book series, and i see the flow and beauty pouring out. Wonderful! |
This is the best poem ever:) |
This is the best poem ever:) |
by Liliana
Could you guys make this any better, I dont think so, this is awesome, great job you two :) |
by The Queen
Nice imagery you have here, you two. Now I've got a perfect excuse to work on my rhyming skills. Loved the repetition as well, perfect diction and overall effect. |
by Carissa
Beautiful (: |
by neon sunset
It's so beautiful. it's very unforgettable and it painted a soft watercolor master piece in my mind. |
Très belle, very beautiful you two, your words took me into the love story |