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  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    This made me sad reading it, bcuz i know EXACTLY how this feels & what you're going through.

    but remember he ISNT worth it & you WILL find someone who DESERVES you.

    This poem is filled with such strong emotion, it pours out each & every line.
    I loved it girl,
    you got me.i promise were make it through this together<3
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by lOsT sOuL

    This is really heart touching poems...It shows show much pain.... Words are so true and poeweful.....It kinda makes me feel like i am the person who is going through all these pain.... you have nicely capture ur feelings in words i loved how you have create this poem.. great work...

    Mostly all of ur stanza are awsome.. they shows ur pain and you have smthing inside you which shows ur little hope and faith.. Everything will be alrite...
    This Stanza is so painfull
    but today is not that day
    I'll lie to myself to survive
    I'll lie to myself to stop the pain
    I'll lie to forget
    but all that stuff will hide
    only to come back again
    but still I'll lie to myself
    not caring
    because I'm gone
    lost
    only to be found

    Great piece of work.. I know you will get through every pain u r going through.. :):) 5/5