Wow!!!!...very awesome poem i love love loved it it was a great explination of love and very truthful...u can fill the emotion and u read each line...it's very disiarable...i absolutely loved reading it :) :) very well written :) 20 stars 5/5

Amazing job. You have a strong voice, beautiful word choice, wonderful, clear message, and an outstanding flow. I love this, I think you have penned an excellent piece. 5/5 as well