by laura Sep 20, 2011
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
It's not about where i am |
Even tho you used repetition, the flow is amazing. |
by sweet escape
This piece is very uplifting. The repetition helps one with the flow and it stresses exactly what you want. I love this poem. Everyone, at some point in their life has failed or been hurt and had to get back up. Life always has a light at the end of it, and your poem shows that perfectly. |