This piece is very uplifting. The repetition helps one with the flow and it stresses exactly what you want. I love this poem. Everyone, at some point in their life has failed or been hurt and had to get back up. Life always has a light at the end of it, and your poem shows that perfectly.

Even tho you used repetition, the flow is amazing.
I love the strong feelings it holds.
absolutely beautiful!
5/5