Lost

by Bree Lane   Sep 20, 2011


Ive lost the will to live
i don't know what to do anymore
he cheated, the regret hurts
where did i go wrong?
what am i suppose to do now?
i did so much with him and its all gone now
i hate this,
its horrible knowing he just moved on in a couple days,
with the girl he cheated with,
i feel abused, as he abused me
i feel hurt, just like he hurt me,
i miss him and i shouldn't,
i give up and now its time for revenge.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Bree Lane

    You cant really tell me how to right my own poems.. ill put what ever i want in them..no offence.

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I feel abused, as he abused me
    i feel hurt, just like he hurt me,
    i miss him and i shouldn't,
    i give up and now its time for revenge.

    - Love that part(:

    getting revenge on somebody that hurts u like that is bitter sweet. The love you feel & the hurt that he caused you pours through. it flows so well, its short but right to the point.
    Great job
    5/5

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