I feel abused, as he abused me
i feel hurt, just like he hurt me,
i miss him and i shouldn't,
i give up and now its time for revenge.

- Love that part(:

getting revenge on somebody that hurts u like that is bitter sweet. The love you feel & the hurt that he caused you pours through. it flows so well, its short but right to the point.
Great job
5/5

You cant really tell me how to right my own poems.. ill put what ever i want in them..no offence.