Comments : The Beach

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I love this poem :)

    You can see everything you said & you can imagine yourself at the beach with all these things.

    It flowed well & was really good :)
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    A cute little poem, living here I get to enjoy the beach often, though I am a mountain kinda guy the ocean is very cool.
    Liked the flow , nicely done