Babe no offense but ur exgirlfriend that's nagging me right now is saying that she doesnt' like it not one bit elaborate alot dude!

U shouldn't think like this cuz there's so much out there for u and i believe good things will happen i hope for them...don't give up i bet u worth alot to someone :)
good poem though and sorry if i affended u with this comment...
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This is good, i liked it :)