Opening Kiss

by Larry Chamberlin   Sep 21, 2011


Took the key to your heart
from under the front doormat;
slipped in so quietly not
even the guard dog
knew I was there.

Found you as always
tending that secret garden,
nurturing tiny gardenia blooms;
murmered love's true name and felt
a smile brush me ere you turned.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Unknown

    So vivid for short poem, very sweet. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow fantastic and vivid greatly done :) 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Decayed

    Amazing scenery in the 1st stanza. It kind of reminded me of one of The Script new songs: If you ever come back

  • 13 years ago

    by DirtRoadGirl

    :) this is cute 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I love this :).

    It flowed perfectly and the love pours out. You can picture yourself entering the house slowly & carefully and a smile appearing.
    Amazing job :)
    5/5

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