This is a good poem, short but powerful; great work :)

This is a sad poem I almost want to cry as if my own heart was ripped out...the flow and poem stuff was ok I feel it just a vent of somekind rather than a poem and I am not trying to be rude so sorry if u don't enjoy this comment but I loved reading ur poem and it's a great poem :) :)

This is cute:) but sad I like it:)