You seem to have a reoccurring theme in your work, again amazing job, you seem to understand particles and things of that nature really well, i wonder did you study these things?

I didn't like the title at first glance. I thought this would have a 'scientific' sort of theme, and there'd be a lot of confusing words, and to be honest I am a little lazy right now hah. But in the end, I like that simple path in which you took this piece to. The connection of science and faith/belief/God was really smooth. Many would take that and be negative with a topic such as this, but you made them connect. This is certainly a breath of fresh air. Great job :)
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The first particle was god, then created sound, the sound of the big bang, and here we are.

Everything is a big conundrum but the beauty of puzzles are when we solve them. Though, this type of conundrum seems really hard to comprehend.

Good piece.

All your poems seem to revolve on one theme. You must be really into sound. I thought God first created light.