by abracadabra
BAHAHAHAHA. You are ever so wonderful. We are all ever so wonderful. |
by sibyllene
HAHAhahahahaha.... yes. It had better get nominated. |
I enjoyed the poem but loved the comments :-) good job everyone. I hope it's nominated too .. |
by Decayed
"Abby wabby fabby slighly scabby!" |
by Saerelune
A very intense prelude you've got there, very nicely done. It has this eerie feeling to it, the kind of feeling a kid must have when he's home alone while it's dark outside. He walks up the creaking stairs, into the darkness, prepared for something unknown looming up. He notices something rustling beneath his bed, he's afraid but also brave ... so he looks underneath his bed and realises ... |
by Britt
Knowing you guys the way I do, it started out serious, Abby got antsy, and then everyone became inactive and that's why it ended the way it did ;) Hahaha, this was hilarious. |
by silvershoes
YES. I just came across this poem and the comments. I've been missing out. |
by Narphangu
LMAO. Win. |
This is lovely and vividly painted in one. It make one feel of the eerieness at that moment of eventual sum of events. Quiet petrifying but beautifully detailled and crafted. With just the 4 pieces of your poems that I read. Your creativity knows no bounds. And I am sure I'll be a regualr reader of your ouevres. |