by Matthew Schut Sep 27, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Tears fall so suddenly |
Wow... Very, very, very powerful and revealing into core feelings.... Very well written and emotionally expressive. |
Wow... Very, very, very powerful and revealing into core feelings.... Very well written and emotionally expressive. |
by BlueJay
Dang, this is wonderful!! It has a great use of imagery, thanks to the excellent word choice. Great job on the flow. The story is there and so is the emotion, though I think there could be a stronger voice... |
Wow great poem,towards the end i wanted to cry... |
I LOVE this(: |