If I made it through, if I battled the
odds that would exhausted the life in
me, will you be there to hold me when
I am falling down?
- My favorite stanza, but the whole poem is amazing :)

It flows perfectly, wanting so badly to go back to the way things once were. Asking if you took the step would he be there for you. The love & pain you feel pours out.

Great Job:)
5/5

Oh my, this is too much emotions wrapped up in one piece,
while i can see the misery of loving someone you can't be with. i have to tell you that there is no fighting needed to be done. no surrendering either, you just get used it and to be able to do that you must have an astonishing power of will, and that my friend you excel in =-)
Gjob dear

The first two stanzas hit home for me!
You expressed the emotions flawlessly. Amazing.

Love it x)