This is very nice, it expresses emotions that anyone would be lucky to behold! great job :)

I think this is a nice poem..
It flows very well and puts together the pieces of your heart and the expressions it wants to bring out!
5/5

Well done very sincere and heartfelt 5/5

Wrap my heart with your words of love.
Embrace me like the wings from above.

As our eyes lock,
time flows away at the edges of a clock.

Very nice lines, uniquely presented. Love the expressions in them. Great write.