That was hetic lol i was a bit thrown off and the first time i read it i didnt like it but i read it a few more times and realised its meant to throw u off and spin your head out n tbh now i love the idea its so everywhere and random that it works very well ... i think you did a bold move with this and it paid off welldone x

I like this poem.

The idea that love makes our world spin around!

You mentioned

You love me
I hate me
You hate me
I love you

It makes me feel like the relationship is hectic in the way that it keeps going back and forth.

I like the way this was written and can relate to this poem also.

x